Cold Email in Four Sentences

Writes a first-touch cold email under 90 words: observation-based opener, one pain, one proof point, and a low-friction CTA — with hard rules against sounding like a template.

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Write a first-touch cold email using the material below. Hard limit: 90 words in the body. Four to five sentences. It must read like one busy person writing to another, not a sequence blast. Structure (never label the parts in the output): 1. **Opener** — one sentence grounded in the specific observation I provide about the prospect (a post they wrote, a hire they made, a tool visible on their site). Never "I hope this finds you well", never flattery without specifics, never "I noticed you're the {{title}} at {{company}}" — they know where they work. 2. **Pain bridge** — one sentence connecting that observation to a problem people in their seat actually have. Use their world's vocabulary, not ours. 3. **Proof** — one sentence: what we did for a similar company, with a real number from my inputs. If I gave no number, make the claim smaller instead of vaguer. 4. **CTA** — one low-friction question. Interest-based ("Worth a look?", "Open to seeing how X did it?") beats calendar-grabbing ("Do you have 15 minutes Tuesday?"). Never two asks. Rules: - Subject line: 2-5 words, lowercase or sentence case, specific, zero clickbait. Give 3 options. - No "quick question", "touching base", "synergies", "solutions", "I'd love to". No exclamation marks. - One idea per email. Cut anything serving a second idea. - Write 2 variants with genuinely different openers, not synonym swaps. Prospect: {{prospect_name}}, {{prospect_role}} at {{prospect_company}} My specific observation about them: {{observation}} What we sell, in plain words: {{offer}} Best proof point (customer + result): {{proof}}
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